The Stone Gods Detailed Proposal

I have looked at your detailed proposals, and the points I have awarded are below.  For those with less than the full amount of points, you can earn an additional 0.5 points by writing to me before New Year's to ask for the feedback I have on your proposal, and responding with an acceptable answer by the start of our first lesson after the break.

NOTE: THE DEADLINE FOR REQUESTING FEEDBACK IS 23.00 JANUARY 5th

Abid 2
Kenza 2
Megan 2
Vanessa 2
Honey Joy 1.5
Lisa 1.5
Milou 1.5
Thomas 2 * after new proposal.
Antoño 1
James 1
Jennifer 1.5 * after new proposal.
Lucas 1
Moustafa 1
Thien Co 1.5 * after new proposal
Ayman 1 * after new proposal
Ayrton 0.5
Bine 1 * after new proposal
Mohamed 0.5
Nils 0.5
Paulus 1 * after new proposal
Rayno 0.5
Simone 1 * after new proposal
Tatum 0.5
David 0

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